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About Alicia Dean

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Chryse Wymer on Colons – Writing Tips

I would like to welcome Chryse Wymer today. She’s here to help us understand colons a little better. Thank you for joining me, Chryse.

Many thanks to the illustrious Alicia Dean for allowing me to guest post on my favorite topic: colons. I was introduced to her work through a friend who assured me that it was worth the read, and I was pleasantly surprised at the writing quality and storytelling—I’m just not much on romance books or those heavy on the romantic subplots. But I’m glad I gave it a go.

Why I’m here: this month, I’ll be hopping along from blog to blog to share my knowledge on the nuts and bolts of great writing. I am a copy editor, proofreader, and author—published both traditionally and independently. I’m also raffling off Amazon gift cards to get you started on your editing bookshelves. You can contact me at chrysewymer@yahoo.com, or, for more information, visit: http://ocdeditor.weebly.com/ At the previous site, I’ll also be keeping a list of the blogs I’ve visited and the subject matter I’ve shared. The giveaway starts December 1st and ends January 1st.

Let’s get to it.

COLONS – Part Two

The first few paragraphs below are repeated from my last post; there are reasons for that: one snippet is quite important, and the video is helpful. If you have a handle on the basics, in my opinion, it’s easier to understand the specifics. I would also urge you to read the previous post on Kriss Morton’s blog: http://cabingoddess.com/ It thoroughly details the main colon usage that a fiction writer will employ.

I want to reiterate, again, that colons and semicolons are often misused. The semicolon stops the forward movement of a statement while a colon marks a forward movement, often emphasizing it.

Colons promise the completion of something just begun.

The following video is, in my opinion, helpful in differentiating basic colon vs. semicolon use: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dU0x4Ipj-5Q There are grammatical errors in it, but the actual information on semicolons vs. colons is correct.

*See Kriss Morton’s blog for the first use of a colon. I am adding each blog stop to my own blog (as I go) for convenience: http://ocdeditor.weebly.com/blog.html

The second use of a colon is to introduce a list of items, often after the terms the following and as follows—e.g.: For the scavenger hunt, we need the following: rubber duckies, a 1997 quarter, and a bottle of calamine lotion.

Third, the colon formally introduces a fully self-contained quotation. Block-form quotations must take a colon, but if it’s run in with the text, a comma is also acceptable. E.g.: “Einstein said this about the mind: ‘If a cluttered desk is a sign of a cluttered mind, of what, then, is an empty desk a sign?’”

Thank you for reading, and join us tomorrow for the final installment on colons at Alison DeLuca’s blog, Fresh Pot of Tea: http://alisondeluca.blogspot.com/ We’ll be covering a couple simple uses as well as common errors. The final installment will be lighter next time (promise).

BIOGRAPHY

Chryse Wymer is a freelance copy editor and proofreader whose main focus is on indie writers. Her clients have been well reviewed, and one was recently chosen as a top-five finalist in The Kindle Book Review’s 2013 Best Indie Book Awards in his category: mystery/thriller. For some years, she has been particularly obsessed with William S. Burroughs’s writing, who happened to coin the term heavy metal … her favorite music. You can contact her at chrysewymer@yahoo.com, follow her on twitter: @ChryseWymer, or like her on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/ChryseWymer

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: TV Geeks

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing TV Geeks.

Myself and some of my friends are sharing our Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list:

Sheldon Cooper from Big Bang Theory, Vince Masuka from Dexter, Spencer Reid from Criminal Minds

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Click on book titles below to learn more and to be taken to a buy link

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Me (Alicia Dean). Author of Liberty Divided Isle of Fangs Book 2 One man can fulfill her destiny, the other can fulfill her fantasy ~

WANT: Sheldon Cooper. There’s something about his intelligence, geekiness, and oblivion to the experience of coitus that makes me want to be the first to get his attention, if you know what I mean. Plus, I think he’s hilarious. Definitely the best part of the show. I’m attracted to people who make me laugh. Besides, I’m surely a better choice than Amy Farrah Fowler. She should NOT be his first.

WED:  Vince Masuka. Yes, he’s a slimy little pervert, and not in the least attractive, but as his wife, I would get to be around Dexter. And, heck yeah, I would cheat on Vince with Dexter. In a heartbeat. Besides, Vince is funny…remember, I like funny. 🙂

WASTE: Spencer Reid, he’s a cutie, and those brains make him all the more attractive, but it’s really process of elimination. Besides, I haven’t watched Criminal Minds religiously, so I’m not quite as attached to Spencer as I would be if I had.

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JESSICA E. SUBJECT, author of ALIEN ADMIRER Website: http://jessicasubject.com

Want: Sheldon from Big Bang Theory – I think I could teach him a thing or two 😉 and he could help me with research, too. But, I think after a bit, he would drive me crazy.

Wed: Spencer Reid from Criminal Minds – He’s cute, very smart without being annoying, and sweet.

Waste: Vince Masuka from Dexter – No offence to him, but I never watched Dexter, so I’d never heard of him before now.

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Juli D. Revezzo, author of Passion’s Sacred Dance He may be her savior in disguise, but can she trust him?
Website: http://julidrevezzo.com

Want: Spencer Reid–He’s cute, plus, I love a man not afraid of facial hair.

Wed: Sheldon. Fan boy who appreciates the nuances of Star Wars and Star Trek. Plus, he’s so smart, imagine what kind of tidbits you could learn picking his brain.

Waste: Vince Masuka, um, can you imagine the nightmares that guy must have every night? Plus, the whole kinky sex thing isn’t quite up my alley.

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SILVER JAMES, author of CHRISTMAS MOON – a Moonstruck Christmas Story Website: http://www.silverjames.com

Want – Vince Masuka from Dexter. He’s funny, in a weirdly warped way. (See how I’m incorporating the theme? I could at least laugh at him.

Wed – Spencer Reid from Criminal Minds. Spencer takes himself a little too seriously but hey, he’s employed with government benefits. And he travels a lot. I’d have free time. 

Waste – Sheldon from Big Bang Theory because, well…he’s just too…”too” for me. And he doesn’t like to be touched. Now if it were Leonard… I admit that I have a bit of geekgirl crush on Leonard. 

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Now we’d like to hear from you….which of these Geeky Guys would you Want, Wed, and Waste?

Thanks for playing!

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Vampire Diaries Kindle Worlds and a Kindle Paperwhite Giveaway!

Congratulations to Mary A. Daniels! Her name was drawn as the winner for the Kindle Paperwhite. Thank you so much to everyone who participated. I enjoyed chatting with you and seeing the answers you came up with for the Quiz.

The correct answers are:

From WHAT THE HEART WANTS

1)      DAMON

2)      ELENA

3)      KLAUS

4)      STEFAN

From DIVINE ENEMY

5)      DAMON

6)      ELENA

7)      CAROLINE

8)      STEFAN

Here is a reminder of the lines with the speaker added to each one:

WHAT THE HEART WANTS

1) “So how long do you think you’ll make it in this town if you go about willy-nilly draining people?” DAMON

2)  “I’m a vampire. It’s what we do. It’s not like you haven’t killed.” ELENA

3) “What I want is for you to tell me where your boyfriend is hiding. Save us both a lot of headaches. I can stop this incessant search, and you could quit worrying about his death and start to accept it, start the grieving process. I’ll be here for a shoulder to cry on.” KLAUS

4) “Why don’t we work together to make Klaus human? Then you won’t have to run from him anymore. Elena can remain a vampire and you and I—” STEFAN

DIVINE ENEMY

5) “Chaos. Kind of has a nice ring to it.” DAMON

6) “He wants me to go back to Mystic Falls. Try to talk Damon off the ledge.” ELENA

7) “You know, as much as I hate to defend Damon, he did it because he was afraid your grief would destroy you.” CAROLINE

8) “Sorority girls, Damon? Really? I thought you’d outgrown that.” STEFAN

Welcome Vampire Diaries fans and non-Vampire Diaries fans alike (and if you are in the ‘non’ category, I’d like to extend my sympathy :))

For TVD fans…

Remember in Season 4, episode 15, ‘Stand by Me,’ when Elena turned off her humanity and burned her house down? My Vampire Diaries Kindle Worlds story takes up where that episode left off.

 Have you ever wondered…

What if the events that unfolded had happened differently? What if Katherine wasn’t the one who took the cure? What if Elena no longer got her choice between the Salvatore Brothers? What if Klaus hadn’t gone to New Orleans, and was still in Mystic Falls tormenting Caroline?

The opportunity to write and publish Vampire Diaries books for Amazon’s Kindle Worlds was the biggest thrill of my career. I had a blast entering the world of Mystic Falls and inventing plots for the characters I love. I hope Vampire Diaries fans enjoy reading them half as much as I enjoyed writing them.

!!! – I am running a contest from now through midnight, December 16, 2013 for the chance to win a Kindle Paperwhite. If you already have one, and you win the drawing, you can give the extra one for a gift. How’s that for perfect timing? I LOVE my Kindle. It’s a fantastic prize. See the bottom of this post for ways to enter. – !!!

Both Kindle ebooks, What the Heart Wants and Divine Enemy are available on Amazon for $1.99. Click on the covers to be taken to the Amazon buy link. Below I’ve shared the entire first chapter of What the Heart Wants. I hope you enjoy!

(I love comments, so feel free to leave me one in the comment section, even if it’s to tell me you ‘didn’t’ enjoy the chapter :))

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GIVEAWAY!!! One lucky winner will win a Kindle Paperwhite. Contest runs through December 16 at 11:59 p.m. Several ways to enter. Click on the Rafflecopter link at the bottom of the post to be taken to the entry widget.

Chapter One

“Jeremy?”

Elena sat up in bed. Her frantic gaze darted around the bedroom. Morning sun glinted from between the shades. Where was she . . .? What was she doing . . .? Then she remembered. The Salvatore mansion. She lifted a hand to her cheek and pulled it away, staring at her damp fingers. Tears. Her shoulders slumped.

She shook the last vestiges of sleep from her mind. The only time her dead brother entered her thoughts was when she slept. There would be no more sleeping today. She flung off the covers and climbed from the bed. Not bothering to dress, she hurried down the stairs in her pajamas.

“Going somewhere?”

Stefan’s voice reached her just as she grabbed hold of the doorknob. She turned. He didn’t look like he’d been in bed. Maybe he had trouble sleeping with her and Damon under the same roof. Even though she had her own room, she had to admit, it was a little odd for the three of them to be living together considering their history. But it didn’t bother her. These days, nothing bothered her.

“Hunting,” she told him.

Stefan’s dark brows rose. “We have plenty of blood bags.”

She lifted a shoulder and smiled. “I feel like hunting.”

“Shouldn’t we talk about planning Jeremy’s memorial service?”

“Not interested.” She wouldn’t stand in the midst of a crowd and pretend to care. Pretend to remember anything about him.

He crossed his arms and shook his head. “People will wonder why you aren’t giving your brother a service.”

“Tell them whatever you want. I don’t care.” She put her hand on the doorknob.

“So I noticed.”

She rolled her eyes and tugged the door open.

“Elena?” Delbert, one of Liz’s deputies, stood on the stoop. “The sheriff sent me to talk to you about the fire at your house. You have a minute?”

“Hmmmm.” She licked her lips, then looked at Stefan over her shoulder and smiled. “I had no idea they delivered.”

“Elena!” Stefan reached out a hand, but before he could move, Elena snatched the deputy into her grip.

That familiar rush filled her. Excitement and hunger, and need and thrill, all rolled into one. She protracted her fangs and gouged the struggling deputy’s neck. Warm sweet blood pulsed into her mouth. She moaned in delight.

Stefan was at her shoulder, tugging, yelling for her to let go, but he couldn’t physically force her. If he did, he’d risk ripping Delbert’s throat out.

So she drank.

•  •  •

“What’s all the . . .?” Damon halted when he saw Elena in the doorway feasting on the deputy.

Stefan whirled on him. “You did this. You turned off her humanity. Are you happy?”

Damon shrugged. “Rarely.”

“Stop her. Use the sire bond, whatever you have to do. She’s going to kill him.”

Damon glanced back to Elena and her dinner. The man was limp in her arms. Stefan was right. A few more seconds, and the guy would be nothing but a mound of dead flesh.

Shooting to her side, Damon said, “Elena, stop! Let him go!”

She ignored him. Her eyes were closed, and little sounds of ecstasy emitted from her throat. There was a time in the not too distant past when she’d made that noise for him. Since he’d convinced her to shut off her humanity, she felt nothing. For anything. Or anyone. Including him. But if she killed the guy, there would be a lot of questions. And one of these days, if she ever got her humanity back, she’d fall to pieces.

“Elena! As your sire, I command you to stop!”

Her shoulders stiffened. With obvious reluctance, she lifted her head, looking up at him. Her eyes were glazed, her mouth dripping blood. She released the deputy, and he slumped lifelessly to the porch.

Damon looked at Stefan. “You’re up little brother. Revive him, then make him forget.”

Stefan glared at him, but dropped to his knees beside the deputy and used his fangs to open a vein in his own wrist. He held the blood to the deputy’s mouth, waiting while he drank.

Elena didn’t bother wiping the blood from her mouth. She stood, breathing heavily, staring down at her victim like a starving person stares at a feast.

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Caroline held the phone to her ear, her heart lifting at the sound of Tyler’s voice. “Oh my God, Tyler. You finally called me back. I’m sorry I had to tell you about Jeremy in a voice mail.” His calling her was risky, but she was so glad to hear from him. She didn’t know how much longer she could go on not hearing his voice, not knowing if he was okay.

“Yeah.” The words were thick with tears. She gave him time to compose himself. After a few seconds, he said, “I can’t believe he’s really gone.”

“Me either.” They were both silent. Caroline’s heart ached for Jeremy, but at the same time reveled in the knowledge that, though she didn’t know where Tyler was, right now, he was just at the other end of the phone line.

“I miss you,” Tyler said softly.

“Miss you too.” She sucked in a sob. Losing Jeremy was unbearable. Being here at his memorial service was one of the hardest things she’d ever done. But losing Tyler on top of it was excruciating. Before she’d turned, she’d been self-centered and shallow. It was crazy that becoming a vampire had made her a better person.

“I want to come back.”

“No,” she cried. “No, you can’t. He’ll kill you.”

“This is no way to live. I might as well be dead.”

“Don’t say that. As long as you’re alive, there’s hope. Hope for us.” She looked back to where the mourners were gathered. “I wish you could be here for the service.”

“Yeah. Thanks to that asshole, I can’t.”

“Caroline, they’re about to start.” She turned to find Stefan at her elbow.

“Thanks, Stefan. I’ll be right there.” Into the phone, she said, “I’ve got to go. Call me again?”

“Soon. I promise.”

She hung up and said to Stefan, “I can’t believe Jeremy’s really gone.” She sniffed back tears.

“I know. I can’t either.”

Her gaze fell on Klaus. He was staring directly at her, and her heart thumped erratically. How could a man who terrified her, a man she hated, make her pulse give the slightest skip when he looked at her?

Because she was twisted and pathetic, that’s why. The man had shown a hint of compassion for a few fleeting seconds; first when he’d drawn her portrait, and then when he’d saved her by giving her his blood, but that didn’t mean he wasn’t an evil monster. After all, she wouldn’t have needed his blood if he hadn’t bitten her and injected his fatal wolf venom into her system. Asshole.

What the hell was he even doing here? He had a lot of nerve showing his face after the pain he’d caused everyone in this town. But then Klaus was never one to care about others’ feelings.

“Where’s Bonnie?” Stefan’s gaze searched the sea of people.

Caroline shook her head. “She’s not coming. She won’t accept that he’s gone. She’s gone nuts trying to find a way to bring him back.”

“I’m afraid he’s not coming back. We all have to accept that.”

“Yeah. Tell that to Bonnie.”

She and Stefan headed toward the crowd. Elena stood on the fringe, dry-eyed, looking . . . bored.

Caroline frowned. “Elena isn’t crying. She doesn’t seem upset at all.” She drew in a shaky breath. “I guess she’s in shock.”

“No,” Stefan said with a heavy sigh. “Damon told her to turn off her humanity.”

Caroline stopped walking. “What?” she squeaked. She shot a look around the crowd, then lowered her voice. “He might as well have killed her.”

Stefan grimaced. “Maybe he did.”

•  •  •

Hayley crossed her arms and rested her foot against the tree trunk.

“I don’t understand what we’re doing here.” Howie looked around warily. “After what you did, Tyler will kill you if he finds you.”

“I told you. Shane promised my parents would come back. He lied. Now he has released a centuries old witch, vampire, whatever. Endangered humans, wolves, and vampires. He’s caused the death of dozens to get his wife back. We’re here to find him. And to kill him.”

“If we don’t get killed first,” he muttered.

“Tyler isn’t even in town. He’s hiding from Klaus.”

Howie nodded. “Smart move. We should be hiding too.”

Hayley rolled her eyes and pushed off the tree. “No, Shane should be hiding.”

She glanced up. The sunlight had faded. Smoky darkness filled the sky. The full moon was a glowing platter against the black night. It wouldn’t be long now. Fear pounded through her blood, prickled goose bumps over her flesh. She hated turning, dreaded the pain. But it was her nature. Her destiny. And it made her a deadly force. Professor Shane would wet himself if she found him in wolf form. She rested a hand on the knife in her jacket pocket. Little did he know, if she found him in human form, he would be just as dead.

“You’re in love with Tyler,” Howie accused. His thick brows hooded his eyes. His thin body quaked. “That’s why you’re doing this. You’re hoping he’ll forgive you.”

Hayley swallowed the knot of tears rising to her throat. Wolves didn’t cry. And she wasn’t in love with Tyler. She liked him, hated what she’d done to him, but love? That was for schoolgirls and romance novels.

“You’re way off. I have to finish this with Shane. And I’m not scared. Katherine Pierce owes me. I helped her find the cure. She’ll back us up.”

“You’re working with a psychotic she-vamp?” His voice quivered. Chicken.

“I’m playing it smart. It’s called survival.” After Katherine had saved her ass, she’d had no choice but to go along with her plan to obtain the cure. Besides, it was the last thing Professor Shane wanted. That made it all the sweeter.

Howie tightened his lips and didn’t reply.

Hayley unbuttoned her blouse, slipped it off her shoulders, and then shed the rest of her clothing. Turning was hell on the wardrobe.

“I don’t care if—” Her breath left her lungs in a rush as intense pain shot through her body. She screamed and dropped to the ground. Heat sizzled the backs of her eyeballs. The cracking sound of bones breaking, of limbs twisting, pierced the night. Excruciating pain shot through her hands. She stared at them, watched as they morphed into paws.

Distantly, she was aware of Howie screaming too. But the awareness soon faded, and all that remained was the agony.

•  •  •

Damon leaned a hand on the mantle and stared into the fire. “Where the hell are you, Katherine?” he muttered under his breath.

“Good question,” Stefan said from behind him. Damon hadn’t known he’d come in the room. Didn’t say much for his vampire hearing. His instincts.

“Yeah, we have plenty of questions.” Damon let out a heavy sigh. “Now we need answers.”

“We’ll turn this entire town upside down until we find her. She can’t be far. She’ll want to be near Klaus so she can offer him a deal.”

“Her freedom for the cure.”

“Then Klaus has control.”

Damon nodded, squinting at his brother. “Is that so bad? Klaus wants Elena to have the cure. Isn’t that what you want?”

Stefan shook his head. “Not anymore. Not since Jeremy died. She won’t survive the grief.”

“Her life has gone to hell since she became a vampire. Eventually, she needs to become human again. Then she can move on. Deal with her grief.” He gave a humorless grin. “Find someone to share a life with. Someone human who can give her babies and white picket fences.” He tensed against the pain the words caused. The thing she wanted most was something he could never give her. That and her brother back.

“Come on, Damon. You don’t want her to become human again. You’re in love with her. You have her just like you want her; a vampire with no humanity left.”

“I made her turn and shut it off so she wouldn’t fall apart over Jeremy’s death. I still want what’s best for her. If she wants to be human, that’s what I want.”

“I don’t want to be human.”

They turned. Elena stood in the doorway, looking from one to another with cold, dead eyes. Damon grimaced and turned away. Seeing her like that was hard. The old spark, the essence that made her Elena, was gone, and he’d killed it.

Stefan frowned. “What do you mean you don’t want to be human? You’ve hated every second of being a vampire.”

“Not anymore. Why would I want to go back to being human?” Her gaze rested on Damon. “How did you say it? Being human sounds like the most miserable thing on Earth? I agree. This way I can do whatever I want whenever I want. No one expects anything from me.”

“You’re losing all your friends.” Stefan reminded her.

“I don’t need friends.” A smile lifted the corners of her mouth. “I have the two of you. Let’s see . . .” She sauntered into the room and ran a finger along the back of the sofa, her gaze taking in the two of them. “My lover and my former lover. Two brothers who would do anything for me. Have done anything for me.” She stopped in front of Damon and slid her fingernails along his cheek. Her chocolate eyes narrowed on him. “What more could I want, right?”

Damon’s jaw clenched, and he lost his breath at her touch. He still wanted her. Still loved her, even though she was no longer the old Elena. She definitely wasn’t the girl he fell in love with. But she wasn’t in agony either. That was good enough.

Moving to Stefan, she placed a hand over his heart. “You say you don’t love me anymore, but you would still do anything for me.”

Stefan gripped her wrist and removed it from his chest. “I care about you, Elena, but I won’t be played.” He stared down at her. “If you pass up this opportunity to take the cure, one day, you’ll regret it.”

She slowly shook her head. “No more regrets. For eternity.” She smiled. “And thanks to the two of you, eternity is what I now have.”

“If you really don’t want to be human,” Damon said. “We need to keep Klaus from getting the cure. If he gets it, he’ll find a way to force you to take it.” He looked at Stefan. “Are you okay with this, little brother? I know you wanted her to be human again.”

“I meant it when I said I’m no longer in love with her.” He kept his gaze on Elena. She held his stare. Jealousy twisted in Damon’s gut. No matter what either of them said, there was still something there. A love like theirs didn’t die completely. He clenched his jaw, waiting for Stefan’s response.

Finally, he looked away from Elena and said, “If she doesn’t want it, I don’t want her to have it.”

“Then we need a plan. We know Hayley has been working with Katherine. If we find the devious little werewolf chick, she’ll likely lead us to Katherine.”

Stefan nodded. “In the meantime, the two of you need to disappear. Go into hiding. Start over somewhere. The new Elena can’t have any kind of life here in Mystic Falls. And as long as she’s in town, Klaus will be after her, trying to feed her the cure.”

The two of them, finally alone. No one to worry about, no one to save. Damon tried not to show how much the idea excited him. He looked at Elena. “So how about it? We take off together?” He held his breath while he waited for her to answer.

She smiled and shook her head. “No. Don’t think so. Why leave Mystic Falls when I can finally be free of all my old hang-ups? Finally have some real fun?”

Damon stalked across the room and took hold of her arms. He needed to get through to her. This was their chance. “Because, we could start over. Be together.”

He looked back at Stefan. His words were going to hurt his brother, but Stefan would have to get used to the idea of Elena and him together. He brushed her hair back from her face with his thumb and searched her eyes for some sign that she still cared about him. “I believed you when you said you don’t love me because of the sire bond. I know you really love me. For me.” He had to believe it. After all they’d been through, all they’d been to each other, their love was stronger than any sire bond.

Elena pursed her lips and looked down at the ground. She was quiet for so long, Damon’s heart started to hurt. When she looked back up at him, he knew why he’d felt such dread. There was no love for him in her eyes. Not even a smidgen. He tightened his jaw.

“I’m sorry Damon. That was the old me. I’m not that girl anymore.” She flung her hair over her shoulder and lifted her chin. “I don’t love you anymore. I don’t feel anything for you now.”

Before he could prevent it, a burst of air left his throat. It felt like he’d been punched in the gut. No torture he’d ever endured could hurt like her words. He closed his eyes. “When I made you turn off your humanity, I killed your love for me.”

She shrugged and nodded. “I guess so.”

“If it means you’re not grieving anymore, not in pain. Then it was worth it.” He gave her a smile that didn’t reach his heart. “But the thought of never having you is tearing me up.”

“Then maybe you should take a page from your own book. Turn off your humanity. You’ve done it before. It’s not like you don’t know how. Just turn it off.”

He gritted his teeth. She was right. He had done it before. But he was alone then. Despised by everyone. Now he had his brother back. He had friends, and he had Elena. At least for a short time. He narrowed his eyes on her for a moment, then turned back to Stefan who’d stood quietly by, listening but not speaking. Damon was sure if he could read his thoughts, there would be at least a little bit of satisfaction in them.

Thankfully, his brother didn’t comment on the fact that Elena had ripped out his heart and stomped on it. “So I guess we make a plan. One that will keep Elena safe from Klaus, and one that will help us find Hayley.”

“Where would you hang out if you were a she-wolf, running in fear for your life, but desperate to help a she-vamp deliver a cure to a psychotic original vampire?”

Stefan grinned. “Good question.”

“The Lockwood dungeon,” Elena said.

They turned to look at her.

“That’s where Tyler always went to turn,” she said. “It’s deep in the woods. A good place for a werewolf to run free, stay out of sight. Tonight’s a full moon, though. I don’t think we want to find Hayley tonight.”

•  •  •

Katherine paced in front of her band of devoted wolves. The morning sun peeked through the trees. The wolves’ eyes were glassy, their faces pale. They looked like the wrong end of a bad night. She was close to having what she wanted. Close to finally being free of Klaus’s threats. As pitiful as they all looked, they were her ticket to safety. God, power felt good. Best of all they were here to serve her.

“I hope you all enjoyed yourselves last night. Now that we’ve gotten the nasty full moon business behind us for a month, I expect full cooperation with my plan.”

“What plan?” Hayley asked. “You never said what you want us to do.”

Katherine rested her gaze on the girl. She was young, pretty. Tough, with a youthful fervor Katherine had lost centuries ago. She’d been invaluable in helping Katherine get hold of the cure. But she might prove to be more trouble than she was worth. “It’s on a need-to-know basis.”

“We have a right to know what you have in store for us,” Hayley persisted.

Katherine tightened her lips and turned her glare on Hayley. “I saved your asses from the vampires in New Orleans. If you feel the need to question me, maybe I should rip your head off right now.”

Fear flashed in the girl’s eyes, but she lifted her chin and returned Katherine’s glare. Hmm. The girl had balls. More so than most of the guys in the pack.

“I helped you find the cure,” Hayley said. “Now you have a bargaining chip with Klaus. I’d say that’s an even trade.”

Katherine moved closer, until they were nearly nose to nose. “Don’t forget who the superior species here is. You don’t want to screw with me. Trust me on that one.”

Hayley audibly swallowed. After a few more seconds of holding the stare, her gaze dropped away. She nodded and stepped away like a good little puppy.

The wolves, in addition to the cure, would be her peace offerings to Klaus. The thought of negotiating with him made her gut clench. He terrified her. And she’d never been afraid of anything. She had the cure. She had the bonus. Now she needed to get them to Klaus, but make sure she did it in a way to save her hide.

The best way to get to Klaus was through Rebekah. Rebekah might want the cure for herself, but she hated her brother. She wouldn’t want him to get what he wanted. If Katherine could make her think she planned to use the cure to lure Klaus in and kill him . . . would she go for it?

Katherine turned to the wolves, “Don’t leave town. I’ll be back in a few days. And if I find you gone, I’ll find you. And you won’t like what happens when I do.”

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Quiz: Who said it?

Below are lines from What the Heart Wants and Divine Enemy. Win THREE extra entries by guessing who said each line. Instructions can be found when you click on the Rafflecopter Giveaway link. A few might be painfully obvious, the others not so much. You don’t have to get the answers correct to get the extra entry, but it might be fun to guess:

WHAT THE HEART WANTS

1) “So how long do you think you’ll make it in this town if you go about willy-nilly draining people?”

2)  “I’m a vampire. It’s what we do. It’s not like you haven’t killed.”

3) “What I want is for you to tell me where your boyfriend is hiding. Save us both a lot of headaches. I can stop this incessant search, and you could quit worrying about his death and start to accept it, start the grieving process. I’ll be here for a shoulder to cry on.”

4) “Why don’t we work together to make Klaus human? Then you won’t have to run from him anymore. Elena can remain a vampire and you and I—”

DIVINE ENEMY

5) “Chaos. Kind of has a nice ring to it.”

6) “He wants me to go back to Mystic Falls. Try to talk Damon off the ledge.”

7) “You know, as much as I hate to defend Damon, he did it because he was afraid your grief would destroy you.”

8) “Sorority girls, Damon? Really? I thought you’d outgrown that.”

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: NFL, MLB, and NBA Athletes

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing Professional Athletes.

Myself and some of my friends are sharing our Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list:

Kevin Durant, Tom Brady, and Derek Jeter

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Me (Alicia Dean). Author of Liberty Divided Isle of Fangs Book 2 ~ One man can fulfill her destiny, the other can fulfill her fantasy

WANT: I suppose it would have to be Tom Brady. I don’t like the Patriots, nor do I care for him, but he IS hot, so… Yeah, I could overcome my dislike and suffer through it. Just once.

WED:  Kevin Durant, only because I CANNOT marry a Yankee! I don’t care for basketball at all, and I don’t know much about him, but he is on my home city’s team (I guess he’s still with the Thunder?). Anyway, he wins by default. (Plus, he’s loaded! Not that the others are exactly poverty-stricken)

WASTE: Jeter. He’s a cutie, and he’s a phenomenal ballplayer, but I cannot, in good conscience, entertain any positive thoughts about anyone or anything associated with the New York Yankees. I would, however, ‘want’ him if given the opportunity.

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Marie Tuhart, author of More Than One Night, Website: www.marietuhart.com

Want: Tom Brady.  I adore football and Brady just does it for me.  Plus he grew up not too far from where I did.  And he is taken with a cute baby.

Wed: Derek Jeter.  While I’m not a huge baseball fan, he’s the closest to my age (although I’m older) and I just like looking at him.  And he’s starting a publishing venture with Simon and Schuster.

Waste: Kevin Durant.  I don’t watch basketball and I really don’t care for it.  Plus he’s a little too young.  But he’s a good looking man and he’ll find the right woman soon.

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Kathy L Wheeler, author of Lies That Bind  Would a modern woman marry for convenience to protect the identity of her child? Hell yes.  Http://kathylwheeler.com

Wed: I LOVE LOVE LOVE Kevin Durant. As I have been seeing him regularly now for four years. (At least 84 days out of the year.) Half of that in person. He’s widely traveled you know. He’s a born nurturer (because he loves his mama so!)  He’s an all around generous, down-to-earth sweetheart. He laughs at himself, plays well with others… and I would flourish in his positive aura.

Want: Derek Jeter…nah…I want Kevin Durant too. 

Waste: Tom Brady….strikes me as Kevin’s polar opposite.

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Now we’d like to hear from you….which of these Hottie Athletes would you Want, Wed, and Waste?

Thanks for playing!

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Read the First Three Chapters of Liberty Divided, Isle of Fangs Book 2….FREE….

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One man can fulfill her destiny…the other can fulfill her fantasy.

To quell the rise of evil vampires, Liberty Van Helsing must embrace her newfound Hunter destiny. But she has a great deal to learn, and Eli Barkley—the vampire who has been teaching her—has already betrayed her once. Her goal is to shut Eli out of her life and become a better hunter on her own—and to focus on her new romance with hot Australian, Ryan Kelly, a human she can trust.

But when a rogue vampire begins savagely killing young women, the authorities insist Liberty work with Eli to find the murderer. Liberty must overlook Eli’s epic betrayal and find a way to get along with him if they are to stop the unknown maniac and protect innocent lives.

Yet, the more time Liberty spends with Eli, the more her unwanted attraction to him grows. She starts to question her feelings for Ryan—are they real, or could Eli be ‘the one?’ As Eli and Liberty delve further into the murders, clues surface that point to Eli as the culprit. Can she trust him now? Or will she have to plunge a stake into his heart, breaking her own, just when she’s learning to believe in him again?

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Prologue

 Sang Croc Island – French Polynesia

The night breeze blowing in from the ocean brought with it the intoxicating aromas of suntan oil and blood. Although there weren’t a lot of humans on the beach now that dusk had fallen, the heady scent of the rich, red fluid was strong enough that the vampire could still smell it just beneath the surface of their flesh. He drew in a breath and slowly exhaled. Delicious.

The sliver of moon drifted in the black sky and shone on the white sand, providing enough light so that, even if he weren’t a vampire, he could still see clearly.

He strolled along the beach, blending in with the handful of human tourists hanging about. He’d been itching for the sun to go down, had barely slept all day. He was hungry. Jonesing for a feed. Mostly, though, he was anxious to put the next phase of his plan in motion. Slow and steady. Wasn’t that how the tortoise had won the race?

He strode across the soft sand, looking out at the glassy surface of the ocean—a sight he would never see the way it was meant to be seen, in sunlight. The cruel irony of being a vampire on a tropical island wasn’t lost on him.

Ah well, while he was unable to enjoy the daytime, fortunately, beautiful, tasty women were always out in abundance, even after darkness fell.

Evidence of his prediction came when he spotted two girls in barely-there bikinis at the edge of the ocean. They kicked water on one another, giggling and squealing in oblivious delight.

Girls. They were the easiest.

They passed a bottle of Lambrusco back and forth, chugging straight from the neck. He grinned. How fitting. In a matter of moments, he would be chugging straight from the neck.

He approached silently, not speaking until he was within a foot of where they frolicked. “Ladies? Enjoying yourselves?”

They turned startled eyes on him. The expression on the tall brunette’s face became a flirty smile. The shorter of the two still looked wary.

“Tons,” the brunette said. She held out the bottle. “Want a sip?”

His lips spread into a grin. “More than you can imagine.”

She laughed and released the Lambrusco into his grip. He put it to his mouth and drank. The wine was a cheap, sweet red. The taste couldn’t compare to the sweet red of the blood flowing through the girls’ veins. Veins he would tap into shortly.

“Skyler, we’d better be heading back to the hotel,” Miss Blond, Short, and Skeptical said to her friend.

He moved closer to the blonde and walked into the ocean, ignoring the unpleasant feeling of water-soaked shoes. He stared down, letting his eyes capture hers. “Why is that? The party’s only just begun.”

She swallowed audibly, and the pulse in her neck jumped. Excitement bloomed in his chest. He hadn’t been sure which one would die, but now he knew. This one had spunk. She would not only taste delicious, conquering her would be more exciting.

She started to look away, but he gripped her chin in his fingers. “What’s your name?” he asked softly.

“Mine’s Skyler,” her friend said from behind him, as if he hadn’t just heard the blonde call her by name. “She can go back to the hotel if she wants and—”

“Silence!” He whirled on the brunette. She blinked at him in hurt confusion. Sensitive little thing. For God’s sake. It wasn’t like he said her bikini made her look fat.

Still holding the blonde’s chin, he focused on the brunette’s eyes. “Look at me and listen carefully.” He kept his voice low, commanding. “Stand there quietly and don’t move. Don’t make a sound until I tell you it’s okay. Understand?”

“Hey,” her blond friend said. “You can’t tell her what to do.”

He let out a frustrated breath. Mesmerizing two chicks at once was not an easy feat.

He turned back to the blonde and made sure they were eye to eye. Made sure he had her complete attention. “You will also be quiet. Do exactly as I say. Understand?”

A frown marred her brows, but she gave a quick, jerky nod. Barely under. Good. He didn’t want her too docile when the time came.

Back to the brunette, he said, “No matter what happens, no matter what you see, you won’t make a peep. You won’t move. Got it?”

She nodded and immediately quieted. The only sounds were those of crashing waves and distant conversations of other humans.

“Your name?” he demanded again.

“Patrice,” she finally muttered.

“Well, Patrice, because you’re so enticing, so remarkable, you will have to be sacrificed. But take solace in the fact that your friend will be spared.”

She blinked rapidly. Her mouth dropped open, and little mewling sounds came out. “What? I…you’re going to…?”

He released her chin and gripped a handful of hair at the back of her head. “Not a sound, I said.” She fell silent, and he reveled in the terror-filled eyes. So easy.

He yanked her to him and tugged her head back. With a growl, he protracted his fangs and drove them deep into her flesh.

Hot sweet blood with just a hint of wine flowed into his mouth. He nearly moaned in satisfaction. The feeding was good…great, but being another step closer to exacting revenge…well, that was about as good as it got.

She struggled silently, clawing at his shoulders, trying to shove him away. Nice. He liked a little fight. But the fight soon fled. Her body went limp. The flow of blood slowed. Her heart no longer pumped it to him. He released her, and her body hit the water with a splash.

He turned back to her friend, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. Silent tears coursed down her cheeks. Her body trembled violently, but she remained silent, standing where he’d left her.

He ignored the flicker of sympathy crowding its way into his soul. He was a vampire, after all. It was in his nature to feed…to kill. No room for a conscience. No room for weakness.

He stalked to the brunette and grabbed her shoulders, looking down into her eyes. “Listen carefully,” he said. “I want you to wait ten minutes, then run up the beach, screaming. Report this to the police. You understand?”

She nodded.

“Good. And this is what you’ll tell them…”

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 Chapter One

 Liberty Van Helsing could almost believe last night had been a dream—that she hadn’t hunted vampires, hadn’t actually killed vampires—had it not been for the aches in every muscle of her body and the bandage on her arm that covered a bullet wound.

Business was slow at the tiki bar. But of course her boss, Jerome, wouldn’t let her off early. The Perfect Getaway had to be fully manned at all times, with the bright smiling faces of a staff eager to serve. All she felt like doing was going home and pulling the covers over her head, sleeping for a week.

“How are you making it?” Ryan Kelly spoke at her shoulder as she loaded plates from the warmer onto a tray.

Her pulse quickened at the sound of his voice. She glanced up to find his dark eyes roaming over her from head to toe, worry evident in their black depths. “I’m fine.”

He frowned. “I don’t think so. Tell me how you’re really doing.”

She swallowed back a lump of tears. There’s no crying in vampire hunting…

She’d learned less than a month ago that she was a descendant of the vampire hunter, Van Helsing. She’d traveled from her small Oklahoma hometown to this strange island to meet the father she’d never known existed. And gotten so much more than she bargained for. Her father passed away before she really got to know him. And here she was, destined to take up where he left off. Hunting and slaying vampires when she was barely out of high school, had never even had a fist fight, and the sight of blood made her hurl. Some hunter she was.

“Well, how I’m really doing is, I’m a little freaked about what I did last night.” She brushed a hank of hair behind her ear. “My arm hurts like hell, and I’ve barely slept. Better?”

He shrugged. “More honest, at least.” He covered her hand with his. “I’ll do whatever I can to help you through this. You know that, right?”

She nodded. “I’ll be fine. Really.”

He pointed to the tray. “Let me take that. You don’t need to be lifting with that arm.” He took hold of the tray and scowled at her. “You should have called in.”

“I’m fine. I can get this.” She tugged on the tray, but he didn’t release it. “Ryan, you can’t coddle me. And you can’t do my job. You’re tending bar tonight, and I’ll just have to suck it up. Jerome would’ve had a hissy fit if I’d called in.”

“Bloody dingo,” he muttered.

Liberty smiled. Although she didn’t understand all of his Australian idioms, she was sure the insult fit their boss perfectly. “Come on, get behind the bar, and let me do my job. I appreciate your concern, but if I’m going to be a hunter, I need to suck it up, get tougher.”

He winked and flashed his adorable grin, making the laugh lines around his eyes more pronounced. “I like you soft, just like you are.”

Warmth spread through her belly, and she smiled self-consciously. “Thanks.”

She liked Ryan. Maybe not as much as he liked her, but he was ten times better than the cheating boyfriend she’d left behind in Oklahoma.

She lifted the tray and instantly regretted not taking Ryan up on his offer. Her wound screamed with the weight, even though she was using her good arm to bear most of it.

Gritting her teeth against the pain, she headed to the table. Female laughter shrieked through the room, and Liberty knew exactly where it came from.

She smiled at her customers, but inside she seethed. Eli was here with two girls. How dare he show his face after what had happened last night? It wasn’t like the Getaway was the only bar on the island.

“Jerk,” she mumbled under her breath. “Can I get you anything else?” she asked the two couples she was serving.

“We’ll have another round.”

“Coming right up.” She put the empty tray on the rack and started toward the bar to order the drinks, glancing at her other tables to make sure they didn’t need anything, and tried to ignore Eli Barkley.

But in spite of her determination, her eyes strayed to his table. He was leaned back in his seat, arms draped on the backs of the bamboo chairs on either side of him. Each chair held a female—one blonde and one with flaming red hair—both with envy-inducing curves.

Eli’s dark blond hair was in its usual disarray, his silver eyes glinting as he laughed. His pose was relaxed, like nothing had happened. Like she wasn’t in the room. Like he didn’t give a damn.

Fine. She didn’t give a damn either.

Lips compressed, she stalked to the bar. “Two margaritas, a hurricane, and a Bloody Mary.”

Ryan peered at her, eyes narrowed. “You okay?”

She nodded. “Yeah, I’m okay. It’s just that Eli is getting under my skin.”

“Did he say something to you?”

“No,” she admitted reluctantly. “I just think he could have picked a different place to drink and whore around after what happened last night.”

“You know, it’s really not his fault. It was kind of a dick move for me to tell you he used to be one of the Evil Ones.”

Both good and bad vampires inhabited the island. The EO’s not only fed, but drained the life from some of their victims—and they turned as many humans as they could each full moon night, which was the only night a human could be turned. Her job was to hunt them and prevent them from multiplying so the island wouldn’t be overrun with their kind.

She compressed her lips. “No, it was a dick move that you didn’t tell me in the beginning. I had a right to know who would be training me. Who I’d be spending hours alone with.”

“Yeah, but he’s different now. He’s on our side.”

Her gaze went back to the table. Irritation tightened her voice. “I think Eli is only on Eli’s side.”

Ryan slid the drinks onto her tray. “He’s not a bad sort, really.”

The friendship between Ryan and Eli baffled her. A thoughtful, sensitive human and a lying, heartless, jerkwad vampire. Go figure. She stole another glance at Eli and his companions. “Who are those girls?”

“I don’t know the blonde, but the redhead is Grace. She’s a…friend…from Eli’s past. They met during the Civil War.”

The Civil War? Even though she knew of the existence of vampires, she couldn’t help but be stunned at the reality of it all.

“How old is Eli?” She’d never asked the question. It hadn’t really occurred to her that he could possibly be centuries old.

“Twenty-one in human years. In vampire years, he’s about two-hundred and fifty. He was turned in the 1700’s.”

She shook her head. Unbelievable. He’d been around in the Revolutionary War. It seemed implausible, but she knew it was true. The last month had taught her that nothing was beyond the realm of possibility.

“I know.” Ryan grinned. “Hard to accept, right? It took me a while. I would say you’ll get used to it, but I still haven’t.”

“I totally get that.” She took the tray of drinks to her table and dropped the check. “I’ll take care of that whenever you’re ready.” Maybe they would get the hint. It was closing time, and there were only a few customers left, Eli and his friends included. At least they weren’t in her section. She could go as soon as her last table left.

“Here, we’ll take care of it now.” One of the men offered her a credit card.

Relieved, she accepted the card. She could finish up her closing duties and take off. Finally.

After clearing her section and settling her money for the evening, she headed to the parking lot.

Her first several weeks on the island, she’d had to depend on rides from others. But Antoine—the manservant she’d inherited from her dead father—had insisted she have her own transportation, and they’d purchased a nearly-new blue Corolla for her use. She was still nervous driving in a strange country, but it was damn convenient to have her own wheels.

The Perfect Getaway sat on the beach, and the parking lot was lined with palm trees and red and pink hibiscus plants. The scent of vanilla orchids hung in the air. Such a paradise, yet it held such darkness and evil. She shivered.

“Rough night?”

She jumped at the sound of Eli’s voice. Speaking of darkness and evil

She turned a glare on him. He stood directly behind her, hands shoved in his pockets, yet he’d been in the bar only seconds ago.

“Don’t do that,” she snapped. She looked back at the tiki bar. “How the hell did you…?” She shook her head. “Never mind. You’re a vampire. You move with the speed of light.”

He grinned and slanted his upper body toward her. “Yeah, but we’ve got all that darkness brewing inside. Ironic, isn’t it?”

She swung away from him and took hold of the door handle. “Whatever. I’m tired, so you’ll understand if I don’t feel like hanging out and bantering with you. Besides, your dates are waiting for you.”

“Jealous?”

She snorted a laugh. “No. Sympathetic. Better them than me.”

“Why is it I don’t believe you?”

“Maybe because you’re delusional?” She gave him an overly sweet smile before turning away to jerk the car door open.

“I see you’re still pouting because I didn’t tell you I was once a big, bad vampire.”

“It doesn’t matter. You warned me early on not to trust you. I should have listened.”

“And now you should put on your big girl panties and get over it. You’re a hunter, Liberty. You need to toughen up.”

Toughen up? Was he kidding? She’d risked her life last night, had worked her ass off training, and he was calling her a wimp. To hell with him. She started to slide into the car, but his voice stopped her.

“You can be mad at me all you want, but you can’t completely shut me out.”

“Watch me,” she bit out, not turning around.

“Let me ask you something. What difference would it have made if you’d known in the beginning?”

She slammed the door and whirled on him. “At least I’d have known who—what—I was dealing with.”

“Would you still have let me train you?”

“I’m not sure. But I had the right to know. To have all the facts before making that decision.”

“If you had chosen not to let me train you, how do you think you would have fared last night? Not knowing the truth was for your own good.”

She gave a bitter laugh. “Yeah, and I’m sure you’re all about what’s best for me.”

“Look, you’re going to have to put all that behind you. Like it or not, you still need me.”

“No, I don’t. I’ll keep practicing. I’ll be fine.”

“You can’t take that chance. If I hadn’t saved your ass last night, we wouldn’t be having this conversation.”

Just like him to throw that in her face. She huffed out a sigh of irritation. “Thanks, but from here on out, I can take care of myself.”

He stepped closer, backing her up to the door. The only way she could get away from him was to climb inside the car. But she didn’t.

“What’s wrong?” He raised his eyebrows, amusement lifting the corners of his mouth. “Are you afraid of me now?”

She tilted her chin up and met his eyes. Eyes that were molten grey in the semi-darkness. “Not afraid. Pissed off. There’s a difference.”

He chuckled. “Well, it’s nice to know I have an effect on you.” His gaze dropped to her throat. “Your pulse is beating like crazy. Right here.” He stroked a finger down her neck, sending heat skittering over her flesh. Damn him. She sucked in a breath and clenched her teeth.

“I can see it.” He dropped his hand, and his gaze locked onto hers. “No matter how much you’d like to be, you’re not immune to me, Liberty Van Helsing.”

She swallowed hard, trying to slow her racing pulse. “I need to get home. Let me go.”

His lips curved in a grin, and his voice lowered to a near whisper. “I’m not touching you.”

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Chapter Two

Eli stepped out into the balmy darkness with his two companions. They’d closed down the tiki bar and had to vacate. Besides, it lost some of its appeal once Liberty left. Tormenting her was so much fun. She was so quick to rise to the bait. Her moss green eyes would darken, and her full lips would tighten. Her chest would rise and fall with angry breaths…

He inwardly groaned. Yeah, fun to torment. That’s why he screwed with her. It had nothing to do with his wanting a reaction from her, any kind of reaction as long as her focus was on him. Pathetic. What kind of self-respecting bad ass vampire would let a slip of a girl like her consume his thoughts?

But like it or not, she had. Now he’d pissed her off and she might not agree to let him continue to train her. If she didn’t, she would die. It was that simple. There was no way she had acquired the skills she needed to be a true Van Helsing. Now that the Evil Ones knew of her existence, she had more to worry about than the feeding frenzy during full moons. She’d have to watch her back nightly. Not to mention, the EOs’ big bad leader, Rupert, was now focused on her and would stop at nothing to make her his. She definitely needed Eli’s help, but she was too damn stubborn to accept it.

“You’re not thinking of that little Van Helsing girl, are you?” Grace’s whisper penetrated his reverie. “She’s cute, Eli, but looks to be way more trouble than she’s worth.” Her eyes raked the blonde walking in front of them. “Besides, we have something much more pressing at the moment.” She winked. “Dinner.”

Eli chuckled. “You always did have a thing for blondes.”

She shrugged. “They taste…sweeter somehow.”

He and Grace had met in 1863. He’d joined the Union out of boredom and met her when the savage group of soldiers he’d aligned himself with had raided her Georgia plantation. They’d slain her servants and her husband, then decided to have a little fun with Grace before killing her too.

Although having a conscience was not usually his forte, something about her quiet terror, the attempt at courage reflected in her dark brown eyes, her soft flesh…the blue vein visible along the side of her pale neck, he’d had a change of heart. He’d turned on his men. In a matter of seconds, he slaughtered all five of them. Grace had been more terrified than grateful.

“What kind of monster are you?” she’d stammered, her voice rising with panic.

“The kind that saved your ass.” He’d jerked her to her feet, stared into her eyes, and mesmerized her into being compliant.

He had to wait for a full moon before he could turn her. That was five days away. During that time, they remained at her plantation. He fed on her, had sex with her—after a few days, she’d initiated it, he hadn’t had to mesmerize her for that. Then on the full moon, he’d turned her. They’d been close friends and occasional sexual partners since then. Once in a while, she popped in to hang out and party with him.

As was the way in the vampire procreation process, since he’d turned her, she’d taken on his characteristics and had been as cold-hearted and bloodthirsty as he when he’d been one of the Evil Ones. Once he switched sides, he’d convinced her to subdue her murderous instincts. With a lot of coaxing and a bit of commanding, she’d come around to his way of thinking. But, like him, she had to constantly fight her dark urges.

“We’re not going to kill her,” he told her now.

She pouted but gave a brief nod. “I know that. I’ll control myself, I promise.”

They’d been walking along the beach and had reached the edge of the water. The blonde stopped and turned to face them. She was in her late thirties with the worn, desperate look of someone who’d partied too much too soon and was heading toward burnout.

“So?” She lifted a brow. “Are we going to do something insanely risky or not?”

Grace’s husky laughter filled the night. “Oh my dear, you have no idea how insane…or how risky.”

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Liberty nestled deeper into the beach towel lying on the soft white sand. A cool breeze drifted over her exposed flesh, even though the warmth of the sun beamed down. Ryan’s strong hands rubbed sunscreen onto her back and shoulders.

Heaven.

She almost didn’t think about the insanity her life had become. Or her run-in with Eli the night before. Or the fact that she missed home, missed her mom so much it was a physical ache. She would call her mother when she got back to the house. But right now, she just wanted to bask in mindless bliss…

“Liberty?” Ryan’s hands slowed.

“Hmmm?” she murmured, not opening her eyes. Why did he have to spoil the moment with talking?

“Are you going to let Eli continue training you?”

She let out a heavy sigh. Especially talking about that.

She rose and reluctantly dislodged Ryan’s skilled hands. “No. I don’t trust him.”

Ryan sat back on his haunches and beseeched her with his dark brown eyes. “If you don’t, you could get hurt. Or worse. And it would be my fault.”

She stood and brushed sand off her black two piece. “How would it be your fault?”

Ryan rose to his feet. “Because I told you the truth about him. If I hadn’t, you’d still let him train you.”

“Ugh. Do we have to talk about Eli on such a beautiful day?”

“Not if you at least promise me you’ll consider it.”

She hesitated then, realizing it wasn’t a commitment, said, “I’ll consider it.”

He smiled, his white teeth flashing against his bronze skin. “That’s all I ask.” He took her hand. “Now, come with me.”

He tugged lightly, and she followed him down the beach until they were knee-deep in the warm, translucent blue-green water.

“Look.”

She followed Ryan’s gaze, and let out a gasp. She could see all the way to the ocean floor. What appeared to be hundreds of tiny fish—ranging in hues from jade to orange to one that was the color of a rainbow—swarmed around a purplish cactus-like mound.

“Is that coral?” she asked.

“It is. Pocillopora, one of the hundreds of species found in the Pacific.”

“My God,” she whispered in awe. “It’s unbelievable.”

“So are you.” Ryan took her hands and tugged her to him. Their bodies lightly bumped, his warm and hard and damp, hers wanting to melt into him.

He caressed her knuckles with his thumbs. “I’m bloody bonkers over you, you know that right?”

She nodded. “I like you too, Ryan. A lot.” The way her pulse rate accelerated and goose bumps pebbled her flesh, she was feeling more than just ‘like,’ but she wasn’t ready to go there. Not yet.

“I know you have feelings for Eli, too.”

Eli again. She opened her mouth to protest, but he placed a finger over her lips. “You hate him right now, because he hurt you. But I’ve seen the way you look at him. The way he looks at you. I know there’s something there, and it’s okay. Because I’m a very patient bloke. You mean too much to me to give up so soon.”

She smiled. “We’ve known each other barely a month.”

“I know. That’s what makes it so bloody great, right? That we could be this in sync this soon.” He slipped his hands around her waist, pulled her closer.

Her breathing slowed, her heart thumping so loudly she was sure he must have heard it. Her lips tingled in anticipation of his kiss.

“Yeah.” Her voice cracked. “Bloody great.”

He smiled. “You’re gorgeous, love. The golden highlights in your chestnut hair shimmer in the sunlight. Your green eyes look like emeralds…a beautiful day with a beautiful girl. It doesn’t get any better.” His voice lowered. “You know, this is something you could never share with Eli.”

A pang of sympathy pierced her heart. What must it be like to live for centuries in the dark? To never feel heavenly sunlight on your face?

She frowned. “Is this your way of one-upping him?”

Ryan grinned. “I guess so. Sorry. Not exactly the way to be the better man, is it?”

She laughed and ran a hand over the carpe diem tattoo in his right bicep. “It’s not a competition. If it were, you’d be in the lead.”

His eyes roamed her face and settled on her lips. He cupped a hand behind her head, his fingers firm on her scalp, the other hand pressing into the small of her back. He bent his head, touched his lips to hers, and all thoughts of Eli fled.

While they kissed, small fish bumped against her legs—which felt a little creepy and cool at the same time. Ryan’s lips on hers, the deep growl in his throat fusing with the sighs coming from hers, was so different, so…magical. A few months ago, she never could have imagined she’d be standing in the South Pacific kissing a gorgeous guy. Of course, she never imagined she’d be out of Oklahoma. Let alone a world away.

She lifted on her tip toes, parted her lips, and Ryan’s tongue slipped inside. Her knees nearly buckled as she was swept away in a torrent of desire she’d never felt before—most definitely not with Cam. On one hand, she hated PDA, knew she should pull away. On the other, this was the most amazing, scariest, and at the same time perfect thing she’d ever experienced, and she didn’t want it to stop.

Somewhere in the back of her mind she wondered…if they were alone, exactly how would this end? Would she give up her virginity to him? The way she felt at this moment, she would be powerless to resist.

A large bump against her legs made her freeze. That was a big ass fish.

She shuddered and broke the kiss. “What the…?”

“What is it?” Ryan’s muscled chest rose and fell with short breaths.

“Some kind of huge…” Liberty looked down, and her heart stuttered to a halt. Trembles shook her body, and a scream tore from her throat.

A woman’s pale face stared up at her from just below the surface of the water.

“Bloody hell,” Ryan muttered. “Come on.”

He took her shoulders and led her onto the sand. Darkness clouded her vision, and the trembles increased.

He tightened his grip. “Look at me, sweetheart.” His voice was steady, comforting.

She lifted her eyes.

“Go up the beach and grab your phone. Call 1-7.” He gently brushed a strand of damp hair from her face. “Can you do that for me?”

She nodded, still trembling. The second dead girl she’d seen since she arrived—the first one had been at a party Eli had thrown. Even though she’d slain vampires, she wasn’t immune to death. Seeing the girls’ bodies was far different from hunting vampires. That had been for protection, to prevent evil from taking over the island. This was tragic, heart-breaking.

Ryan gave her a gentle push, and she hurried up the beach, tiny sobs working their way from her chest to her throat.

Fumbling in her bag, she snatched out her cell phone and punched in the digits.

While she listened to the rings, she watched Ryan. He shouted at the swimmers, waving his arms and motioning for them to come out of the water. Then he bent and gently pulled the girl’s body onto the shore. Maybe it was a bad idea to touch her, tainting evidence and all, but if he didn’t, she could possibly float away and they’d never find her. She’d no doubt be devoured by scavengers…

Bile rose to Liberty’s throat, and she squeezed her eyes shut to banish the image.

“One-seven, what is your emergency?” A French-accented female voice came on the line.

Liberty’s teeth chattered, even though warmth still blazed down from the sun. “There’s been a…” she was going to say murder, but they didn’t know how the girl had died. “…death. We found a girl. Her body. She’s…”

“Are you positive that she is deceased?”

The bloated, pale face rose to her mind. “I’m sure,” Liberty choked out.

“Okay. Please provide your location, and do not touch the body.”

Uh, yeah, no worries. At least not again. Been there, done that.

Liberty spoke quickly, providing the necessary details.

After ending the call, she forced her feet to carry her back down the beach to the edge of the water, where Ryan, head bowed, knelt next to the dead girl like a dejected sentinel.

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Later that evening, Liberty stood at the door of the police station, holding the coin Ryan had given her and rubbing her thumb along the impressions, trying to calm her nerves. She took a deep breath, and pushed the glass door open.

She’d never been in a police station before. What did they want with her? She’d answered their questions at the beach. When the call came from the captain asking her to meet him at the station, she hadn’t known what to make of it. Ryan offered to come with her, but she couldn’t lean on him for everything. As Eli so ingeniously put it, she needed to put on her big girl panties.

Ugh. Why did she always have to think about Eli? He was such a pain…she shouldn’t give him a second thought.

“Liberty?” A woman stood next to a receptionist desk. Behind her, more glass doors led into a squad room. “I am Aiata. You may come on back.” She was in her late twenties, pretty, a native judging from the caramel skin and dark, exotic eyes. A long black braid fell down the middle of her back.

Liberty followed her past two desks overflowing with stacks of papers, one empty, the other occupied by a middle-aged man in a uniform.

Aiata stopped at the back of the squad room, in front of a door with a sign reading “Captain Jacquard.” The office windows were glass, but shades covered them so Liberty couldn’t see inside. Aiata opened the door. “Here she is, gentlemen.”

Liberty stepped inside the room and her throat knotted with anxiety. A large-chested man stood from his seat behind a desk and extended his hand. “Liberty, I’m Captain Jacquard. I think you know these gentlemen.”

Rupert Kilbourne lounged in a chair across from the captain’s desk. Next to him sat a guy she didn’t recognize. He was a few years older than she was, fit, dark-haired, attractive.

He smiled and winked. “So you must be the infamous Liberty Van Helsing. Finally, we meet.” He offered his hand, and she shook it. “You don’t know me. I’m Blake, Rupert’s son.”

Oh God, there was an offspring?

Rupert came to his feet and took her hand, bowing. He placed a lingering kiss on the back. “Liberty, my dear, lovely to see you again.” His silver hair and blue eyes gave him a distinguished, handsome appearance, but a glint of evil hovered somewhere amidst all that charm.

She jerked her hand back and resisted the urge to wipe away his touch. Her gaze went to the final occupant of the room. He stood, gave a small mock bow and a crooked grin. “Yes, Liberty, lovely to see you again.”

Eli.

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Chapter Three

 Liberty looked at the captain. “What are they doing here? In fact, what am I doing here?”

“Please, sit.” In spite of his size, the captain’s voice was smooth, reassuring. “I will explain everything. I appreciate your coming to meet with us.”

“I didn’t realize they would be here, or I would have declined the offer.”

A hard gleam came into his brown eyes. “Then I would have had to come to you. This is a matter of utmost importance, I assure you. Please hear me out.”

Liberty tightened her lips and dropped into a chair flanked by Rupert and Eli. She felt like a gazelle caught between a lion and a cheetah.

Eli leaned over and whispered, “Where’s your shadow?”

The touch of his breath against her ear sent a shiver coursing through her. She shifted away and ignored his question.

“First off,” Captain Jacquard said. “I wanted to tell you how very sorry I am about the incident this afternoon. That must have been quite traumatizing.”

“It was…difficult…yes.”

“I am afraid to inform you that this young lady was not the first victim of a similar attack.”

Liberty snorted a sarcastic laugh. “You mean a vampire attack?” She shot a glance at Rupert, then at Eli. “I must say that doesn’t come as a surprise, Captain. There is no shortage of vicious vampires on the island.”

Rupert spoke from her left. “But these are different. Even the vampires of my…persuasions…have certain guidelines they must follow. We try to be—discreet—when choosing our sustenance. Although at times, our nature takes over and, how shall I put this, our vessels do not survive, we certainly do not condone frequent, public slaughter.”

She raised her brows and forced a note of mock admiration into her voice. “My, you guys are regular altar boys.”

A deep chuckle rumbled from his chest. “You are a little spitfire, are you not?” He looked past her to Eli. “You shall have your hands full with this one, my boy.”

Liberty scowled. “He’ll have his hands full? I can’t imagine why. My plan is to avoid him as much as possible.”

“That is what I wanted to speak with you about,” the captain interjected. He was silent for several moments, his bushy brows lowered into a scowl. “You and Eli are going to have to work together to stop whoever is committing these crimes.”

Shock rendered her speechless. When she found her voice, she said, “Work with him? No way.” She shook her head vehemently. “No freakin’ way.”

“Yes, Captain,” Eli said. “I’m afraid Liberty, in spite of her Van Helsing heritage, is a bit of a weakling. She learned one tiny little thing about me, and now she acts like I’m the anti-Christ. In spite of the fact that more innocent victims will die if we don’t stop this person, we need to consider Miss Van Helsing’s fragile emotional state. I’m afraid it will be more than she can handle to work with the likes of me.”

With each word he spoke, fury built inside Liberty’s chest. She pushed to her feet and whirled on him. “How dare you! Just because I don’t trust you, don’t want to be within twenty feet of you, doesn’t mean I’m a weakling, or fragile. You have a lot of fu—” She halted and took a deep breath. “A lot of freakin’ nerve talking that way about me.” She didn’t know who she was more furious with, Eli, or herself for confirming his assessment and acting like a weakling. She swallowed and continued, “I am not afraid of you. And of course I don’t want more innocent people to die. I’ll hear the captain out, but I would appreciate it if you would stop…baiting me.”

He smiled. “But you rise to the bait so easily. I find it…irresistible.”

The way he said ‘irresistible’ indicated more than just baiting her. A shiver ran down her spine that wasn’t completely unpleasant.

Liberty forced her thoughts away from Eli and sat, directing her attention to the captain. “Of course I will do whatever I can.” She wrinkled her nose in distaste at Eli. “And work with whoever—whatever—I have to in order to stop this person. I’m not sure what I can do that the police can’t, though. What either of us can do.”

Captain Jacquard tapped his fingers on the desktop and frowned. “First of all, the laws on the island are…different. Vampire crimes are to be handled by Van Helsings. After your father’s death, we thought they would fall under our jurisdiction.” His gaze rose and he leveled her a look that was less than friendly. “Now that you’re here, vampire crimes fall to you. I suppose it makes sense. With your hunter skills, and with Eli having been on both sides of the fence, so to speak, the two of you should make a good team. Eli can garner insight into this person’s thinking, his—or her—habits, that we cannot.” The captain’s features sagged, as if he’d aged in front of her eyes. “Additionally, once we find this person, arresting him will be futile. All he has to do is morph into a bat and escape. Or mesmerize our jailers. All manner of options are open to vampires. Which means a different kind of justice is needed to stop this rogue.” He pursed his mouth and his frowned deepened. “We’d hoped to contain this, but these latest murders have drawn media attention. Tourism could suffer. The peace of mind of our residents and tourists will be shattered if we do not put an end to it.”

“I see.” And she did see, but she didn’t have to like the fact that she’d be working with Eli. A hunter teaming up with a vampire? Ridiculous.

“And of course,” the captain said. “My people will offer our assistance in identifying this maniac, but the rest is up to you and Eli.”

Liberty looked at Rupert. “How does this involve you and your son?”

The captain answered for him. “Rupert and Blake want to help because this rogue is endangering their food source and will keep tourists from visiting our island. When your father was alive, the island was in good hands.” His gaze flicked to Rupert. “He kept the population of—dangerous vampires to a minimum. Now, they have multiplied. And as I am sure you are aware, when a vampire sires someone, that new vampire takes on his or her inclinations. Sometimes, they are able to overcome their more—vicious traits, but it is rare. That is another area of grave importance in utilizing your assistance. If you are able to stop this person, their entire line will cease procreating. It will halt any offshoot of evil that might otherwise develop.”

As much as Liberty hated to admit it, the captain made sense. It was settled. She would be working with Eli. What would Ryan think about that? It wasn’t like Ryan owned her, but she cared about him and didn’t want him to worry about her and Eli spending time together. She would just have to make sure Ryan understood that she had no interest in Eli whatsoever. “What’s our first step?”

The captain picked up a baggie from his desk and handed it to her. Inside was a small wrinkled sheet of paper. Liberty smoothed it out through the plastic and looked up with a frown. “I don’t understand. It’s a drawing of a tree.”

“That’s really all we have, other than our eye witness. It was crumpled in her hand. She said the killer gave it to her.”

“What does it mean?”

“We don’t know. Yet. I wanted you to see it in case something similar comes up in your inquiry.” He reached for the bag, and she handed it back. “We need to go over your statement from this afternoon.”

“I already told the officer who came out what happened.”

“Yes, I know. But sometimes after a few hours, new details emerge. So, if you will bear with me, we will quickly run through the events leading up to your discovery of the body.”

“Yes. Sure.”

“Okay. You and Ryan Kelly were standing in the water. The girl’s body bumped against your leg, is that correct?”

Revulsion at the memory washed over her, and she shuddered. “That’s correct.”

“What were you doing that you did not see the body before that time?”

She lifted her brows, surprised at the directness of the question. “What was I—doing?”

“Yes. You and Ryan were in the water, but I assume you were facing away from the location of the body. What were you doing that kept you from noticing the body before?”

Her insides went cold. She felt Eli’s eyes on her, felt him waiting. She took a deep breath and swallowed hard. “I—we—were…kissing.”

She glanced at Eli from the corners of her eyes. Other than a brow lifted in amusement, there was no reaction from him.

“You and Kelly?” This from Blake. “Well, well, the bloke works fast.” He grinned at Eli. “He scooped the pretty girl up right from under your nose, eh?”

Eli frowned, but didn’t respond.

The captain cleared his throat. “If we can get on with this, please?” He said to Liberty, “What happened next?”

She repeated her story, just as she had to the first responder on the scene. She ended with the part about Ryan kneeling next to the dead girl. About his keeping people away and protecting the girl’s dignity.

“So heroic,” Eli murmured.

Liberty shot him a glare.

“Is there anything else you can think of?” Captain Jacquard asked. “Anyone around who seemed suspicious, out of place? Sinister?”

“No, Captain. I believe all of those—” She paused, deliberately turning to Rupert, then to Eli. “—types were sleeping at the time.”

Rupert burst into laughter. She kept her eyes on the captain.

“Okay, I guess that’s all there is to do here. I need you and Eli to take care of something before you go. We have the friend of the victim here at the station. She was with the girl when the attack happened. I asked her to come in. I thought the two of you could speak with her. Liberty, you can perhaps put her at ease and get more details from her, being a young woman about her age. And as for Eli….” He scowled down at his desk then raised his gaze. “Eli, I was hoping you could…mesmerize her. Make her forget she witnessed her friend’s death.”

“What?” Liberty couldn’t control her surprise. “You want a witness to forget the details of a murder?”

“Once we get all the information we need, yes.” The captain’s tone was defensive. “Remembering will not do us any good, nor will it benefit her. The media is already having a field day with this thing. I don’t want them talking to her, blowing her story out of proportion, sensationalizing the whole mess.”

In spite of the overlying ridiculousness of the situation, Liberty understood where the captain was coming from.

“So, if that is all then.” Rupert stood and took both of Liberty’s hands in his, pulling her to her feet. Without even thinking, she allowed it. Her brain was too overwhelmed with all she’d learned to be concerned about his touching her. “I believe the two of you will make a great team.” He looked over her shoulder at Eli. “The four of us actually.” A crooked smile lifted his mouth. “Shall we call it an unholy alliance?”

-#-

Skyler Simmons was waiting for them in a bleak interrogation room with gray walls and a lone table. She looked up when they walked in. Her face was damp, streaked with mascara. She twisted her hands nervously together atop the table.

Liberty sat across from the girl and introduced herself and Eli. Eli took the chair next to Skyler.

“I’m so, so sorry about what happened to your friend, to Patrice,” Liberty said gently. “I can’t imagine how awful that must have been for you.”

Skyler nodded and wiped her face, smearing the black beneath her eyes. “I—I can’t believe it. I still just can’t…” Shaking her head, she dropped her head to stare at her clasped hands. Her shoulders shook.

“Can you tell us about that night? I know it’s difficult, but we want to find the man who hurt Patrice, and we need your help.”

She drew in a shuddering breath. “Patrice and I were just hanging out. We were drinking a little, you know, laughing, having a good time. Then this guy comes up, this attractive guy…” Her gaze went to Eli and she squinted. “He actually looked a lot like you.”

Eli gifted her with a dazzling smile. “Oh, come now, I’m blushing.”

Liberty rolled her eyes. “You say he looked a ‘lot’ like Eli. Can you be more specific? Describe him to me.”

Skyler leaned her head back and stared up at the ceiling. “He was tall, but not mega tall, not like a basketball player or anything. He had sort of dark blond hair and light grey eyes…” Her voice trailed off and she looked at Eli once more. “A lot like you.”

A chill ran over Liberty’s arms. It couldn’t have been Eli, could it? No. No way. He wouldn’t be sitting there playing Mr. Calm and Cool if it were him. Besides, the girl would just say it was him instead of that it looked like him. There had to be more vampires around with that mussed blond hair and those silver eyes…

Liberty took a breath, cleared her throat. “I know this is difficult, Skyler, but can you tell me what he said when he approached? Exactly what happened?”

Hesitantly, tearfully, the girl told her story. “He—he bit her. Oh my God, he tore into her neck, drained her blood, while I just stood there…and…watched.” Her body shook and she turned stricken eyes to Liberty. “I know it seems impossible, but I also know what I saw. A vampire murdered Patrice.” A sob tore from her throat. “Vampires…oh my God. How can that be?” The words ended in a scream.

Liberty rushed around the table and bent to wrap her arms around Skyler. “I’m so sorry. I know what it’s like to lose a best friend.” But not in such a horrifying way as this. No, she knew what it was like to find out your best friend, someone you’d known most of your life, was a cheating backstabber.

Liberty pulled away and plucked a tissue from the box on the table, handing it to Skyler. “Okay, now I want you to sit very still and listen to my friend here. He has something he wants to tell you.”

Liberty stepped back, leaned against the wall, crossed her arms, and watched.

Eli covered the girl’s hands with his. In a low, soft, voice he said, “Skyler, I want you to look into my eyes. Listen to me carefully, okay? Can you do that for me?”

Hesitantly, she nodded, her gaze fixed on him.

“There’s a good girl. I know what you saw was horrible. I know you must have been terrified. I’m going to help you with that. I’m going to take the bad memories, the fear, away. You never saw the man who did this to Patrice, okay? The two of you were hanging out, having a good time, drinking…then you decided to go up the beach to talk to some people. Patrice wanted to stay. After a few minutes, you heard sirens. They told you that Patrice had died, but you didn’t see anything. You didn’t witness her death.”

Eli gave the girl a tender, reassuring smile—one Liberty had never seen him use on her. Maybe he was capable of some decency.

They left the girl in Aiata’s care and walked out into the night. The moisture had become a light misting rain. The island was a quiet, wet, dark oasis.

“Well, we didn’t learn anything helpful,” Eli said. “All we know is that our killer is a devastatingly, handsome, sexy guy.”

“Good Lord.” Liberty huffed out a sigh. “And that he’s full of himself and exaggerates his attributes.”

Eli lifted his hands as if in surrender. “Hey, those were her words, not mine.”

“Uhm, actually they were your words. All she said was that he was attractive, and that he looked like you.”

He shrugged and winked. “That’s all I said too.”

Liberty nearly growled in irritation. Working with him was going to be pure torture.

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: Jane Austen Heroes

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing Jane Austen Heroes.

Some of my friends are sharing their Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list: (I’m sitting this one out since I’ve never seen any of these movies. I know…shame on me! I plan to rectify that soon. Promise!)

Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice (Colin Firth), Captain Wentworth from “Persuasion” (Ciaran Hinds), and Mr. Tilney from “Northanger Abbey” (JJ Feild)

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AMANDA MCCABE, author of RUNNING FROM SCANDAL, Harlequin Historicals December 2013 – Website:  http://ammandamccabe.com/

Want: Mr. Tilney!  He’s adorable and funny, and he knows all about muslins.  But he’s also a clergyman, which might get old pretty quick…

Waste: It pains me to do this, given that he’s so hunky (and patient!  And romantic!  Seriously that letter at the end of “Persuasion” is the most swoon-y thing ever…), but Captain Wentworth.  I get seasick.

Wed: Mr. Darcy, of course!  Pemberley–that is all.

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Callie Hutton, author of The Elusive Wife The Earl of Coventry wants to annul his forced marriage to pursue the lovely Lady Olivia. She has no intention of telling him she’s already his wife. Website: www.calliehutton.com 

Want: Firth Collin. Because nothing beats him coming upon Elizabeth after he swam in the pond. (She waves a fan)

Wed: J J Feild, because he looks like he would be a steady, dependable, ‘no mistress once I’m married’ type of man.

Waste: Ciaran Hinds because he looks way too stiff and disapproving.

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Juli D. Revezzo, Author of Passion’s Sacred DanceHe may be her savior in disguise, but can she trust him? Website: http://julidrevezzo.com

Want: J.J. Feild. he’s just cute, isn’t he?

Wed: Ciaran Hinds. Because he’s seems like he would be a good, stable provider.

Waste: Colin Firth I really hate to Waste the fan favorite–loved him in The King’s Speech–but I had to pick someone for this spot, didn’t I? 😉

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Jill Hughey, author of  Sass Meets Class     Website http://jillhughey.blogspot.com

Want:  Ciarin Hinds as Captain Wentworth. I struggled between Want and Wed, and am still second-guessing myself. If it had been Rupert Penry-Jones version, well, he is wed wed wed.

Wed: Colin Firth as Mr. Darcy. I just think, for the long haul, Colin and I would rub along quite nicely.

Waste: J.J. Field as Mr. Tilney. Nothing against this actor but I dislike the hero and heroine of “Northanger Abbey.” No chemistry in the movie. None for me with him.

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M.J. Schiller, Author of UPON A MIDNIGHT CLEAR ~ When Christmas magic turns to murder.  Website: www.mjschillerauthor.blogspot.com

WANT: Okay, I’m totally cheating and going off the reservation with this one. Matthew *sigh* MacFadyen as Mr. Darcy (the Keira Knightly “Pride and Prejudice”). He’s a total hottie!

WED:  Matthew MacFadyen. (tee-hee)

WASTE: Colin Firth, because he’s no Matthew MacFadyen!

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Charlotte Copper, author of Silver Blade  Website: http://www.charlottecopperauthor.com

WANT:  Captain Wentworth (sigh…..). Who can refuse a man in uniform? However, Mr. Darcy stole my heart long ago, and as such, you are but a want.

WED:  No doubt, Mr. Darcy!!  Doesn’t every woman want a Mr. Darcy? Admittedly, I’d rather have a Matthew Macfadyen version (him walking across the foggy field with his shirt slightly open…swoon) but if forced – go on, twist my arm – I’ll take Colin Firth and his curls falling over his forehead.

WASTE: I’ll have to confess to never seeing or reading Northanger Abbey, so nothing personal Mr.Tilney / JJ Field, but consider yourself wasted.

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Now we’d like to hear from you….which of these Jane Austen Loverboys would you Want, Wed, and Waste?

Thanks for playing!

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: Wyatt Earps and Doc Holliday

The winner of the Amazon gift card is Stacey Greene….thank you for playing, Stacey and congratulations!

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing two Wyatt Earps and Doc Holliday.

Giveaway!!! I am actually trying to learn how to use Rafflecopter, so I am doing a demo test run giveaway. Enter to win a $10 Amazon gift card! The prize is real, though, so be sure to enter. 🙂 There is more than one way to enter – One way is to answer the following question:

Which of these lines are from Tombstone and which from Wyatt Earp? (Answer T for Tombstone and W for Wyatt Earp – You should find a place to answer in the Raffletcopter box below) –

1) “All right, Clanton… you called down the thunder, well now you’ve got it! You see that?”

2) “I’m your huckleberry”

3) “I’m a woman, I like men. If that means I’m not “lady-like”, then I guess I’m just not a lady! At least I’m honest.”

4) “I know it’s not always easy being my friend, but I’ll be there when you need me.”

5) “Mister, I’ve been in a really bad mood for the last few years, so I’d appreciate it if you’d just leave me alone.”

6) “My mama always told me never put off till tomorrow people you can kill today.”

Please note: I could be doing this totally wrong, so bear with me. Whether or not the Rafflecopter/questions are done correctly, I will draw a name for the giveaway. 🙂

For further details on the giveaway, click on the Rafflecopter link at the end of the post

Myself and some of my friends are sharing our Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list:

Kevin Costner as Wyatt Earp, Kurt Russell as Wyatt Earp, Val Kilmer as Doc Holliday

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Me (Alicia Dean). Author of Liberty Divided Isle of Fangs Book 2 ~

WANT: Kilmer as Doc. I was mesmerized by the way he played this part. I love a bad boy, and he was sexy and funny and tough and amazing.

WED:  Russell as Wyatt. This is tough, because I like Costner better than Russell overall, but I didn’t see Wyatt Earp, and I did see Tombstone, and I LOVED this movie, loved Kurt Russell in is.

WASTE: Costner as Wyatt. Yikes…it’s like ripping out my own heart, vampire style, because I ADORE Costner. But, process of elimination, and I didn’t see him in the role, and someone’s gotta go…(rules are rules)…but I love you, Kevin!!! Please forgive me.

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SILVER JAMES, author of SEASON OF THE WITCH, Website: http://www.silverjames.com

Want: Doc Holliday/Val Kilmer because he’s all dark, dangerous, intense…and intent. When I’m looking for a booty call, that works for me! A bad boy with sex appeal and no strings. (Though I really wish you’d offered up Virgil Earp in this version because…SAM ELLIOTT!)

Wed: Wyatt Earp/Kurt Russell because…dude! Kurt Russell! Oh, sorry. Wyatt Earp! But definitely Kurt’s version. Why? Because again, intense and focused. And loyal. He’s all about the family. If I’m going to wed someone, I want to know I can depend on him now and tomorrow and the day after. Besides, he looks awesome in a duster and that mustache. Just sayin’…

Waste: Wyatt Earp/Kevin Costner because I never could take Costner’s version seriously and I have to waste someone.

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Author: Nancy Fraser and Patti Shenberger, authors of The Lawman’s Agreement  Website: www.nancyfraser.ca

Want: Kevin Costner. I have loved this absolutely sexy man since the movie No Way Out! That seduction scene in the back of the limo was fantastic, and often used as inspiration for writing a lovescene … especially the humor of it. Plus, he gets professional acting chops points for holding his own against James Earl Jones in Field of Dreams! His Wyatt Earp was well done and sexy!

Wed: Kurt Russell, despite the fact the he and Goldie have never made it legally official, he’s definitely “home and hearth” material. Plus, in his prime he had an edgy way about him. Loved his somewhat scruffy Wyatt Earp.

Waste: Val Kilmer. I’ve not really got anything AGAINST Val, just nothing for him either. I do have to admit, I was shocked to learn he has a fantastic singing voice. Saw him in the off-Broadway production of The Ten Commandments a number of years ago and was blown away with his rich voice.

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Linda Carroll-Bradd, author of historical western, Dreams of Gold. Website: http://www.lindacarroll-bradd.com/

Want: Val Kilmer has a bad boy quality that shines through his portrayal of this fatally ill outlaw.

Wed: Since seeing his first kid roles in Disney movies, I’ve had a soft spot for Kurt Russell. In a western role, he makes my knees wobble.

Waste: If Kevin Costner would put in the time to learn the dialects of the roles he performs, he might be an actor I’d give more credibility.

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Christine Elaine Black, author of A Rose for Lancaster  !!!Special price for November: 99 cents!!! Website/Blog http://christineelaineblack.blogspot.ca/

Want: Val Kilmer is a bad boy and his mischievous grin makes a girl want to wipe the smile off his face…. at least for a few hours. Definitely want some time alone to horse around with him dressed as Doc Holliday. 

Wed: Kurt Russell is the sweetest guy and pretty hot as Wyatt Earp. A little bit of Wild West with him and I’d be satisfied!!! 

Waste: I’ll pass on Kevin Costner, though he’s cute and it’s a shame to turn him down but a girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do when it comes to running a guy out of a saloon packed with hotties?

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The Generation for Writers by Nikolas Baron

There has never been a better time than now to be an author. It is simply amazing how many doors are open, especially since the rise of eBooks. Big-name publishers are at their wits end, particularly if they stubbornly insist on the good old print-centric gatekeeping. Penguin Books publishing recently got burned in the self-publishing business due to their shady partnership with Author Solutions. However, even Penguin Books is realizing the importance of this new market. Evidently, the migration toward greener pastures was in the hope of keeping away from being on the top of the endangered species list.

Since the start of the year, I’ve been working at Grammarly, a natural linguistics start-up in San Francisco, understanding how writers write. Inevitably, this has given me countless opportunities to engage in rather fascinating conversations with authors from a myriad of backgrounds. Not surprisingly, much of their lament with writing had to do specifically with editing and publishing. The thing is, publishing a book has never been easier. With the current offerings, amateur writers have more say over what is sold on the market. This generation of eBooks has turned the tables on publishers. Let me share the major approaches some successful amateur authors have used to break into the scene.

Firstly, regular writing on public platforms is paramount to getting heard. More than 1.4 million blog posts are published every single day. This gargantuan amount of posts might leave you baffled; your ego must have died a little inside knowing what a pointless tease blogging might be. However, here’s the astonishing bit–every day, 57 million people in the US alone read blogs. Quite predictably, these platforms are the perfect place for gaining a fan base for your writing. What’s more, you cannot discount the need for serious practice before you jump full-swing into the realm of self-publishing. Test your ideas here; see how your audience responds, and go back to your workroom to create a unique voice for yourself. At this stage, consistency in posting on your blog every few days and responding to readers’ comments are vital for your success.

At the same time, you will want to be actively marketing your blog. The easiest and perhaps fastest way to do this is through social media. Post on Twitter and Facebook every time you write a new post. Keep your titles short, thought-provoking, or pleasantly witty to grab the attention of the social media community. Plonk in the link to your blog in your e-mail signature, and take the initiative to promote your blog; Google will not be doing the work for you just because your writing is in cyberspace. Social housekeeping takes hard work, but if you get it right, you will be elevating yourself to another level. Your readers will bring in other readers, and the exponential increase to your fan base will be worth it.

Another issue always discussed around the writer’s table is ideas. It’s amusing to see writers picking each other’s brains, hoping to get inspiration for their next big piece. Interesting topics don’t come by every day, yet it is essential to keep writing. One article I find very helpful to poke me into the right direction is ‘105 Author Blog Prompts’, an article presented by Duolit. Reading their list from marketing posts to creative writing prompts always gives me hints of inspiration.

However, perhaps the most daunting task for any writer is immaculate language. There is a reason why professional authors place so much emphasis on editors. To join the ranks of top writers, having anything less than perfect grammar is just unheard of. The secret weapon many authors have turned to in ensuring perfection isGrammarly, an online proofreading system. Not only isGrammarly a fraction of the cost of a professional editor, it is also more accurate and much faster than any humanly-possible rate.Grammarly has the ability to grammar-check the entire manuscript, picking out precise errors 10 times more consistently than any conventional word processor. Grammarly can also be functioned to suit every document type, ensuring appropriate language for academic essays, presentations, creative writing, reviews, and blogs. Trust me–once you try Grammarly, you will not understand how you ever survived without it.

From speaking to authors of the round table, I have definitely learned a whole lot more about writing, self-publishing, and marketing. Let us know some tips and tricks you use to get yourself heard.

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: Actresses

The winner of the drawing for any Alicia Dean title is Winona Cross. She chose Lady in the Mist as her prize. Thank you, Winona, and congratulations…hope you enjoy the book!

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing actresses.

Giveaway!!! In honor of my 50th blog post, I am giving away one of my titles. Next Tuesday, November 11th, I will draw one name from the commenters, and that person can choose the Kindle version of any Alicia Dean title (if the book is available on another format that you would prefer, let me know and I will see if I can accommodate your preference) – PLEASE be sure to leave your email address in your comment.

Myself and some of my friends are sharing our Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list:

Cameron Diaz, Angelina Jolie, Sandra Bullock (notice I provided a little male eye candy along with the female? You’re welcome!)

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Me (Alicia Dean). Author of Liberty Divided Isle of Fangs Book 2 ~

WANT: Cameron Diaz. She’s hotttt, those gorgeous blue eyes, that perfect body…sexy! Plus, she’s a great actress, and she has a fantastic sense of humor. She’s adorable! Besides, she used to do Justin Timberlake, so it would be like I was doing him too!

WED:  Sandra Bullock. In spite of her horrible choice with Jesse James, I think she’d make a good wife. She’s wholesome and sweet and extremely successful, so she’d take good care of me. And, she’s extremely attractive.

WASTE: Angelina Jolie. This woman just pisses me off. She’s gorgeous, no doubt about that, and I love some of her movies, but I am not over her breaking up Brad and Jennifer. Plus, she’s just freakin’ weird!

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M.J. Schiller, author of TAKEN BY STORM, website:  http://www.mjschillerauthor.blogspot.com/

Want: Cameron Diaz. At first I was going to say Angelina Jolie, ’cause she has that raw sex appeal, but I found another category that fit her better. Cameron Diaz is so cute. I wish I looked like her! Plus, I like her name. She seems upbeat and personable and she’d be someone fun to have a fling with, if I was a guy. But she’s been with a few too many partners to feel comfortable settling down with. Might be a red flag.

Wed: Sandra Bullock. She seems smart and doesn’t seem to be a drama queen like some movie stars. She’s pretty and seems to be fun. She actually has a lot of versatility as an actress. She plays the ditz well, (loved her in “While You Were Sleeping” with Bill Pullman), but can also play strong and sassy, (like in “The Blind Side”) or overbearing (“The Proposal”). With a promising acting career in front of her, she’d be a good provider.

Waste: Angelina Jolie.  She just seems to have a little too much crazy goin’ on!

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Kathryn Freeman, author of Too Charming,  website:   http://kathrynfreeman.co.uk

Excuse me while I put my man brain in…

Want:  Angelina.  Those lips – enough said.  She’s bat crazy and her desire to have a rainbow of children puts me off marrying her so instead I’ll put her in her Lara Croft costume and drool.  A lot.

Wed:  Cameron.  Beautiful and, yes, a bit crazy too, but she looks fun and game for anything.  I don’t think she’d have a problem throwing on her jeans and joining me for a pint with the lads.  But put her in a sexy dress and male eyeballs will roll out of their sockets.  A hot babe who likes to laugh – that’s a keeper.

Waste:  Sandra.  Through my male eyes she’s not quite got what the others have.  Not stunning enough to want.  Not warm and sexy enough to wed.  With my female brain back in, she’s been quoted as saying if she hadn’t been an actress, she would have been a romantic novelist.  Sorry, there’s enough competition out there.

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Linda Carroll-Bradd, author of contemporary western, Tie Down My Heart, website http://www.lindacarroll-bradd.com/

Want: Cameron Diaz, there’s a whole lot of attitude sizzling under that All-American exterior

Wed: Sandra Bullock, because she’s so much like the girl next door.

Waste: Angelina Jolie, although she might look sexy, her persona is too aloof, haughty

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Charlotte Copper, author of Silver Blade  website http://www.charlottecopperauthor.com

WANT:  Angelina Jolie. She’s super hot (admittedly sometimes on the skinny side, but think Tomb Raider), but I wouldn’t want to become co-parent to all those children.  Then again, I forgot to ask…will Brad be coming with her?

WED:  Sandra Bullock. My husband is fully aware that Sandra is the one female out there that I would change teams for! I have pretty much all her movies – even the not so good one. And I was totally devastated when she didn’t end up with Ryan Reynolds.

WASTE: Cameron Diaz. I have never thought much of her (acting or otherwise), and I would certainly not be willing to change teams for her.

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Jessica E. Subject, author of Never Gonna Desert You website http://jessicasubject.com

Want: Angelina Jolie – I’ve always thought she was pretty, but with all of her kids, I wouldn’t want something serious. Just a fling. And I know others don’t, but I do enjoy most of her films, especially the two Lara Croft movies.

Wed: Sandra Bullock – She seems so sweet and funny. An all aroud nice person. And I LOVE her movies.

Waste: Cameron Diaz – Sorry, but she does nothing for me. Some of her movies are funny, but I’m not lining up at the theatres for them, or anxious to rent them.

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Now we’d like to hear from you….which of these sexy women would you Want, Wed, and Waste?

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Wednesday’s Want, Wed, Waste: Movie Monsters

Hello and welcome to my version of the game, ‘F*@#’, Marry, Kill. This week we are WWW’ing Movie Monsters, more or less. It’s a list of villains, even if they aren’t ‘Monsters’.

Myself and some of my friends are sharing our Want, Wed, and Waste choices from this week’s list:

Sheriff of Noddingham, Michael Myers, Hannibal Lecter, Jabba the Hut, Norman Bates, The Mummy

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Me (Alicia Dean). Author of Liberty Divided Isle of Fangs Book 2 ~

WANT: Michael Myers. He’s brooding and sexy. Teenagers get on his nerves as much as they do mine. He’s good with his ‘weapon.’ He doesn’t talk, so there would be no yap, yap, yap afterward. 

WED:  Hannibal Lecter. He’s intelligent, clever, and charming. I think he’d make a great husband, because when he loves a woman, she is his entire focus. Look at how devoted he was to Clarise. Also, it seems like he’s a really good cook.

WASTE: Norman Bates. Skinny little wimp with Mommy issues. And I can’t stand it when a nice, hot shower is interrupted.

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L. A. Kelley, author of Book:  The Naughty List (ON SALE for $2.99 on Kindle until November 26), Website: http://lakelleythenaughtylist.blogspot.com

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WANT:  Alan Rickman as the Sheriff of Nottingham in Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves

Dark brooding good looks, a wicked sense of humor, and an authentic English accent (unlike Kevin Costner’s pathetically inept Robin Hood) makes Alan Rickman every woman’s medieval dream lover. My favorite scene in the movie is when he threatens to cut out Robin Hood’s heart with a spoon. I never wanted a man more.

WED: Arnold Vosloo in The Mummy

He’s smart, he’s passionate, he’s buff, and he’ll resurrect you from the dead if you happened to get caught cheating on the pharaoh. When he promises happily ever after, he means it. Of course, before regeneration the mummy resembles a festering pile of moldy hospital bandages, but a couple of shots of Febreze should take care of any lingering smell. Until he’s back to his human self I’d keep the lights off in the bedroom and enjoy the tender embrace of a man who would literally go to hell and back for me.  

WASTE: Jabba the Hut in Star Wars

Although a hideous intergalactic sexist slug, Jabba thinks he’s all that and a bag of Ewoks. He freezes his enemies to hang as wall art and forces scantily clad women to dance for his pleasure before feeding them to a monster. I’d love to drop-kick his slimy keister into a giant vat of table salt. I dare him to two-step out of that one before desiccation sets in and he’s turned into something resembling a giant shrunken booger.

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Kathy L Wheeler, author of  Lies That Bind, Website: http://kathylwheeler.com;

WANT: Alan Rickman is weird but I think I want him. You might end up dead, but you’d be laughing at least.

WED: Michael Myers, if you are going to end up dead, perhaps it would be quick.

WASTE: Norman Bates is just creepy…and skinny

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Lana Clary, non-author, daughter of Alicia Dean, and a lover of creepy, scary things:

WED– Can my Norman Bates be the Vince Vaughn Norman Bates? Yeah, that’s my Norman Bates. I would TOTALLY wed him. For obvious reasons. And yes, I’d wed him even if he actually WAS Norman Bates in real life. Murder doesn’t scare me.

WANT – If my Norman Bates is Vince Vaughn, and he is, then I would want Michael Myers – no brainer there. I’ve always wanted him. And the only reason I wouldn’t wed him, is because I think there is a larger chance he would snap and murder me with a butcher knife some day, than the chance of Norman snapping. Norman seems like the kind of guy that, as long as you did what he wanted, he’d keep you around. Michael…eh…not so much. He’d be a little quicker to….stab…..you in the back (pun intended). I can’t imagine hot meals on the table, folded laundry, and a clean house every night would make him not kill me, just not the marriage type. I’ve also always thought Michael was extremely sexy – and I bet he’s delightful in bed. Of course, we’d have to leave the mask on. Yum.

WASTE – Oooooh Hannibal Hannibal Hannibal – it pains me to have to waste you. Behind Michael Myers you’re my all time favorite serial killer and I love you so. And of course, Anthony Hopkins, even at his age…..delicious. Accent is yummy, the murderous glint in his eye is hot, and the way he can terrify you to the core with just one comment is a major turn on. There is ONE, simple, frightening reason why I would not be able to make myself marry, or do Hannibal Lecter – he eats people. And I’m not kissing someone who just had liver for dinner 🙂

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Now we’d like to hear from you….which of these Hot Messes would you Want, Wed, and Waste?

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