Got two minutes? Then check out this week’s quick tip ~ A list of words that often confuse writers.
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I see the following words misused often, so I thought perhaps having them listed in one place might come in handy…
Affect / effect
‘Affect’ is normally a verb and ‘effect’ is normally a noun:
The effect of the storm was devastating.
The storm affected the entire town.
Sometimes, ‘effect’ is used as a verb, when meaning ‘to bring about’:
The movement was a great way to effect change.
It can also describe belongings:
The police released her personal effects to her family.
‘Affect’ can also mean to display a false sentiment, or an affectation:
He seemed to like the gift, but I think his reaction was an affect.
It can also describe a facial expression or demeanor:
In spite of her anger, she displayed little affect.
That / which
Use ‘that’ for restrictive clauses for specific, identifying information, and ‘which’ for non restrictive clauses, for general, non-essential information. Normally, the clauses that require ‘which’ will be set off by commas.:
Sitcoms that are funny are my favorite TV shows.
(This sentence is saying that only FUNNY sitcoms are my favorite)
Sitcoms, which are funny, are my favorite TV shows.
(This is basically indicating that all sitcoms are funny, but that sitcoms in general are my favorite TV shows.)
In other words, if you can do without the clause and not change the meaning, the correct word choice is ‘which.’ If eliminating the clause would change the meaning, the word choice is ‘that.’
Blond / Blonde
‘Blond’ is a male noun and ‘Blonde’ is a female noun. There are different schools of thought, depending on which style guidelines you use, but for the most part, ‘blond’ is considered an adjective for either sex. However, in order to keep it simple, the best rule of thumb is ‘blond’ is always for males, and ‘blonde’ is always for females, whether used as a noun or adjective. For non-gender situations (a blond brownie), ‘blond’ is correct.
Discreet / discrete
‘Discreet’ means low-key, modest, cautious.
‘Discrete’ means ‘separate or distinct.’
Alright / all right
‘Alright’ is the incorrect usage of ‘all right’ and doesn’t ‘officially’ exist, although it is becoming more widely accepted.
Lightning / lightening
‘Lightning’ means the flashes in the sky during a storm.
‘Lightening’ means to make lighter, or to lighten
Taught / taut / taunt
‘Taught’ is the past tense of “to teach”
‘Taut’ means tight.
‘Taunt’ means to tease or goad
Mantle / mantel
‘Mantle’ is a cloak or wrap
‘Mantel’ is a shelf above a fireplace
Peak / peek / pique
‘Peak’ is a high point, such as a mountain peak
‘Peek’ means to look or peer at something.
‘Pique’ means annoyance or anger
Further / farther
‘Further’ is abstract (time, amount, feelings)
‘Farther’ is distance you can actually measure
So…do you have trouble with these? What are some words that trip you up?
Until next time…happy writing!
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