Got two minutes? Then check out this week’s quick tip ~ Helpful lists for finding just the right word(s)
Hello and welcome…I am a freelance editor and an editor for The Wild Rose Press, as well as an author. I often struggle with my own writing, and I have found that sometimes, a little reminder of ways to improve the process can be helpful, so, I like to share these moments of brilliance with others :). But, in this busy world of ours, who has time for pages and pages of writing tips? That’s why I’ve condensed mine down to quick flashes you can read in (approximately) two minutes. Enjoy…
Disclaimer: All of my tips are suggestions, and are only my opinion. And, for the most part, there are exceptions when going against my advice will make your story read better. Take what works, leave the rest.
If you’re like me, you find that, oftentimes, your writing all sounds the same. You use the same old words to describe emotion, body language, action verbs, etc. Sometimes it’s difficult to think of fresh ways to express yourself. As I’ve often preached, it’s best to avoid using the word ‘very’ but it can be challenging to find an impactful word to replace the ‘very’ combo (very tired, very angry, etc). Over time, I have come across some ‘cheat sheets’ that help me a great deal. I thought I would share them in hopes they help you too:
1,000 Verbs to Write By (different ways to say ‘run, walked, etc’):
Click here for 1000VerbstoWriteBy
Gestures and Body Movements (if, like me, you have your characters nodding and shrugging all the time)
Click here for Gestures and movements
I suggest that you not use these charts in your first draft. That is the time to get the story down, quickly and in whatever wording flows best at the time. (Yes, I know some of you take your time with your first draft and you barely need any revisions, but for those of us who need to just write the story, asap, I recommend waiting until the next pass to refer to these tools).
So, what do you think? Will these be beneficial? Do you have any ‘cheat sheets’ of your own you’d like to share?
Until next time…happy writing!
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13 responses to “Tuesday Two-Minute Writing Tip – Handy Reference Tools for Varying Your Prose”
Cheat sheets! Love it! Will definitely reference for future writings.Thanks.
A brilliant set of cheat sheets Alicia. Thank you so much. I know exactly what you mean I am always aware that I may be over doing it a bit – my nemeses are – he said, she said they said!!!!I wish I had some cheat sheets to share… I shall add that to my burgeoning list of things to do 🙂
Fantastic reference sheets. Thank you! I especially love the ones for body language…since my characters tend to do the same thing over and over and over. I have some similar sites bookmarked, but I’m always looking for more. 🙂
Great lists. I tend to use the same verbs. Or I know what word I want and can’t think of it. This helps!
Love this! I also use Ackerman and Puglisi’s “The Emotion Thesaurus.” Helps trigger my brain into finding different expressions (it sometimes gets stuck in a rut! Lol). Thanks for sharing this. Love it 🙂
I use that too, J.C. It’s a great way to trigger some ways to express emotion. You’re welcome…glad you like the lists!
I like the charts, but feel the descriptive words for negative emotions are more telling than showing. For example, instead of saying someone is abrasive, show it in dialogue. Or maybe have someone else apologize for their friend’s abrasive behavior. The traits come in handy though for sketching a character’s backstory! Or for internal narrative, perhaps. I like this body language chart better than others I’ve seen. Good stuff! Thanks for the post!
Yes, I agree, Ashantay. I think the purpose of the list is to remind us of some negative traits we can give our characters, not necessarily that we would use the words to ‘tell’ readers our characters have this trait. You are correct, though, we definitely want to ‘show them. I read something recently on characterization and it said, for every trait you give your character, think of an event/anecdote that ‘shows’ your character exhibiting that trait, whether or not you use it in your MS. I haven’t tried it yet, but it sounds like it would be helpful. You’re welcome…thanks for stopping by!
Thanks, everyone…I’m glad the lists are helpful!
Thank you Alicia those are great great or should I say magnificent reference charts!! Thank you
You’re welcome! Glad you like them. 🙂
Another very helpful post, getting saved for future referencing. 🙂
Thank you! Do you mind if I share it on my author website, as well?
You’re welcome. Please feel free to share wherever you would like. Thank you for stopping by!